Milly and I have been working on our pick a path Brock Lee and have finally finished it. We planed out our story then we started to make our slides and added links, then we finally wrote in our story and published it.
I love your intro about the cow, thinking it's the cows in your paddock I can tell you have really through about your pick a path. Maybe next time because you have photos at the start maybe you could put photos all the way through the pick a path. But other wise that it was awesome. Well done.
Really good pick a path Annabelle and Milly, I really enjoyed it and wanted a bit more. I would recommend this book to the age group of 8-15 as I feel it would be understandable and it would entertain this age group best. If you were to do this next time I wold suggest either putting in some images or adding in some color so that its more appealing to the eye. I didn't realize that the end of the book was actually over, you could possibly put a ending page in just to clarify that. Overall I really liked your book good job!
I love your intro about the cow, thinking it's the cows in your paddock I can tell you have really through about your pick a path. Maybe next time because you have photos at the start maybe you could put photos all the way through the pick a path. But other wise that it was awesome. Well done.
ReplyDeleteReally good pick a path Annabelle and Milly, I really enjoyed it and wanted a bit more. I would recommend this book to the age group of 8-15 as I feel it would be understandable and it would entertain this age group best. If you were to do this next time I wold suggest either putting in some images or adding in some color so that its more appealing to the eye. I didn't realize that the end of the book was actually over, you could possibly put a ending page in just to clarify that. Overall I really liked your book good job!
ReplyDeleteThis is not the first of your posts I've read, and you never cease to amaze me. Thank you, and I look forward to reading more.
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