Mahatb's description
In our group we have been describing a picture of Mahtab but it only shows her eyes. So we had to tell where she was and what emotions she is feeling and what she is physically feeling. I have worked on mine for a while her it is.
She stands motionless in the shadows. Anger boils inside of her, she is helpless, and is desperate to fight back, but is trapped knowing if she leaves she will have a slow painful death. Tears well up in her eyes battling the pain of watching innocent beings being torchured. The revolting stench of rotting flesh swirls around her head, nausea flows over her. She brushes against the rough stony surface of the building her breath becoming faster as nervousness rushes through her. She begins to feel sick.
All she wants, is to get away from everything. She feels like screaming but she can't. Things were beginning to unravel about to burst. Mahtab had revealed a part of herself that she had never known. Then she let go tears, flooded out of her eyes she gasped,
“I never asked for any of this all I want is to see my dad again”.
This is a very powerful piece of writing Annabelle. Mahtab certainly has to deal with a lot of issues for a 12 year girl. Some we can't begin to know about. It's good that you are bringing her personal voice out, about what she is thinking and feeling. See me we need to fix up the photo of her eyes
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